Comments on: sleeveless

By: bellzie

bellzie — Tue, 02 Dec 2008 00:13:33 +0000

i love this! i feel the same way so often

By: Olivia Kitty

Olivia Kitty — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 15:52:08 +0000

I like this poem :)

By: Derek

Derek — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 05:31:48 +0000

So I speak up, because I cant take this shit can I get clarification?
I say what I want, shit I don’t ask for more than time, attention…
Maybe that’s expecting too much, so im hurt because I end up let down…AGAIN.
Say I wear my heart on my sleeve and that shit aint attractive.

Loving that right there. This showed that you put a lot of emotion into this. And that’s what I enjoy reading.

By: Shannon

Shannon — Sun, 30 Nov 2008 09:39:17 +0000

Im confused, so let me just chill some, okay?
Imma fall back, let it rock and keep to myself.
Now here comes the “I love you” shit cuz you know something’s wrong
Soon as you get my attention, right back where you want me, it’s whatever.

I this. That’s how I’m feeling right now. Sometimes I want to go sleeveless too.