i had a dream, this poem came to me in said dream. i figured i’d also do audio for it to try and capture the emotion behind it just like it was so vividly in my head. took me forever to recover the words lol. still mad i can’t see who was in the damn dream ! but anyway, have a look or listen, or both…
lay your body next to mine, so our hearts and minds
can intertwine, and combine to become one
as i kiss your lips with my fingertips, and reminisce on moments not yet shared
because our future is our past, and the present is not yet here, leaving what’s behind to begin
because we are everlasting
never ending
captivating from the begining
i got lost in your eyes, captured by your smile, and entrapped in all that is you, yet i found myself within you, became free within you, weightless within…you.
the beat of your heart became my favorite song, and i can listen to it all night long, drifting away to your melody, because you mellow me.
ease me
please me
believe me…
when i say you complete me.
you make me whole, like the mate to my soul. the right to my wrong, the lyrics to my song, the up to my down, the king to my crown…
because you treat me like a queen. got me seeing like i’ve never seen, living out a real life dream, and with us things are always what they seem, because you mean what you say, and say what you mean
never is there an in between.
no confusion
no disillusion
no seclusion…
so i’ve some to this conclusion…that you are the one for me.
eh, took me hell to remember that crap, and i’m not too sure if thats all of it. seems like something should come after. dunno. maybe when i go back to bed it will come to me. but yeah, its 6:30 am, im gonna go try to continue some of the dream.
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Shannon Says:
I love it! I think that most poems are better understood and felt through audio, which is why I did ONE a couple years back in audio. Haven’t done anymore though. -_-
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nesa* Reply:
March 6th, 2009 at 10:07 am
ooo. i still have that on the old desktop !
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Derek Says:
Damn I loved this from beginning to end.
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icey Says:
that was really good. i had a dream before where a poem was being recited unfortunately i didn’t write it down, i think it was because i couldn’t remember it lol. i seem to always forget my dreams once i wake up and start doing other things.
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Rachel Says:
BTW I see you listen to a lot of No Doubt, they’re one of my favoite bands, I’m going to their show this summer :) very happy about the tour
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